When you proofread your review, if it reads as though you are the author of the article or material, your style of writing is not appropriate.

It is important for you to learn how to write about another author’s work. That is different from writing down what the author wrote. Your presentation should not read as though you are the author of the article or material. You are the reviewer of the article, and your paper should read as a review. When you proofread your review, if it reads as though you are the author of the article or material, your style of writing is not appropriate. The reader should clearly understand the difference between the author’s contribution and your presentation and interpretation of that contribution. Under no circumstance should you copy material from an article and represent it as your own work. If you need to quote briefly from an article to make a point, be sure to put the quotation in quotation marks and give the page number of the quote.
The article that my review is based on is in the uploaded files.